Media Project

Lesson 9

Today we were all looking at each others presentations and share our ideas of what we think about them and how they can be improved. we had seen all of our peers presentation and gave them feedback of what we thought was good and what we thought could be improved. Since we had ran out of time we did not have enough time to show our presentation.


The next day we had shown our presentation but everyone thought it was unfinished. we had only shown them a piece of the start to confuse them but instead they ended up saying that we need to improve the music and not make it as loud. we needed to work on our editing. we also needed to improve the story line and make it look like a thriller.

Me and Kento had decided to go back and look at the scenes that we thought were not as good as we wanted them to be and I saw that the music was to loud and didn't exactly fit in with the thriller. I think we have to re film the scenes. I also noticed the scene where Kento was walking into his room the camera was too focused which resulted in the scene being quite blurry which our classed mates didn't like and couldn't understand. I tried to adjust it however I think we should re film that scene as well.